Chapter 3317 Deficiencies

"Yes, at least it made me pay attention to the deep meaning of this book from the fragrant content of "Jin Ping Mei"." Bai Wenbin smiled and scratched his head, "I will never read the little yellow book again."

Everyone laughed, and they were happy and benefited a lot.

Bai Wenli stood up and said excitedly, "Then I'll go upstairs to get the manuscript. Mom and Dad, brother and sister, and eldest nephew, please help me to see. Where is the good, where is the bad?"

"Okay!" Everyone is no longer sleepy at noon today, and it is rare for a family to talk together in peace.

Bai Wenli wrote all novella, three in total, each of about a hundred thousand words. The strokes and strokes were all written by Bai Wenli carefully, and the manuscripts submitted were copied by Bai Wenli.

Although it is not long, it will not be able to be read in a while.

"Don't be in a hurry, you can read it slowly. Jingxuan, you go up to rest, don't be tired." Although Bai Wenli hoped to be evaluated by her family, she also knew that reading novels would take time, "Wen Bin, you Jing Xuan go on his back."

"Okay!" Bai Wenbin put down the manuscript and carried Bai Jingxuan back.

Bai Yixiu and Sun Yingying also returned to the room. They were not sleepy and continued to read the manuscript. After 2:30 in the afternoon, they finished the novel.

"Tell me what you think." Bai Yixiu put the manuscript on the bedside table.

Sun Yingying chuckled, "The rhetoric is gorgeous, and sometimes the characters are described for a long time. Although the vocabulary used is very gorgeous, I don't want to read it, so I just swept it away. In addition, the plot structure is scattered, and the progress of the story is not layer by layer. Logical."

Bai Yixiu laughed and said: "It's really boring to write. The writing style is too deliberate, not concise, and the plot is not refreshing. If I were the editor, I would also reject the manuscript."

"That's what we said, but our daughter wants to publish now. If she wants to publish, she must be made aware of her shortcomings and change her shortcomings in order to improve." Sun Yingying said, "The reason why she has such a strong relationship with Shang Wenjun. I like Shang Wenjun and even admire Shang Wenjun, isn't it because Shang Wenjun published articles and poems in some magazines? If our daughter can also publish, it can also be published, which proves that our daughter is stronger than Shang Wenjun, and when she achieves more and more in literature The more achievements she has, the higher and farther her eyes will be, and naturally she will not only stare at Shang Wenjun."

Bai Yixiu thought about it and felt that Sun Yingying was right, "Yes, how about we pay her to publish it?"

Sun Yingying glared at Bai Yixiu, "You spoil your child like this, how can the child improve? We must not only help Wen Li find her own problems, but also encourage and create conditions to make her realize her own shortcomings, and then she will improve her efforts. Since physical publishing is not possible, we can encourage Wen Li to publish novels on the Internet first. By the way, there is an online novel website, right?"

Bai Yixiu thought about it carefully, but he didn't have the exact memory of it. "Now there are computers, and many Internet cafes are open. The Internet will become more and more popular. There should be."

Sun Yingying nodded, "I have a website called Qiqi Novel in my memory, it seems to have been established quite early. Why don't we go to the Internet cafe to surf the Internet now? If there is, and Wenli is willing to publish it on the Internet, let's buy a computer for Wenli. , install the network to support her creation.”

"Okay!" Bai Yixiu nodded, "Then let's point out the shortcomings of her novels first."