Starting as a Son-in-Law to Establish an Immortal Family

Section 309

[Talent: Ninth-grade Spiritual Root]

[Cultivation: First-grade Qi Refining]

"Alas, ninth-grade spiritual root."

Lu Changsheng sighed softly as he looked at his son Lu Xianzhi's spirit body.

As a person who was promoted from ninth-grade spiritual root to fifth-grade spiritual root, he knew the difference between spiritual roots.

If his son did not have a great opportunity, he would at most be in the late stage of Qi Refining.

"But as my son, he is a great opportunity in itself."

"When I have the strength, I will build my own family spiritual land. With the method of longevity in heaven and earth, I will have hope of forming a pill and forming an infant, not to mention building a foundation."

Lu Changsheng exhaled lightly.

He thought of the matter of establishing his own family.

After so many years in Qingzhu Mountain, he married and had children, and he also had a sense of belonging in his heart.

He really regarded Qingzhu Mountain as half of his home.

But the idea of ​​being independent and establishing his own family of cultivation has never been dispelled.

After all, Lu Changsheng did not regard himself as a member of the Lu family after all, but only regarded Qingzhu Mountain as half of his home.

Therefore, his children, under his arrangement, have not been fully integrated into the Lu family.

Because Lu Changsheng knew it very well in his heart.

In the future, he and his children are destined to take a different path from the Lu family.

If he had stayed in the Lu family, with the continuous improvement of his strength, he would most likely become the ancestor of the Lu family and take charge of the Lu family.

But Lu Changsheng didn't want to do that.

Becoming the ancestor of the Lu family and taking charge of the Lu family is a responsibility in his eyes.

He didn't want to take this responsibility.

He could spend his thoughts, energy, and resources to cultivate his own children one by one.

Even if they were ninth-grade spiritual roots, he was willing to spend time, energy, and resources.

But he couldn't do that for the children of the Lu family.

But if he had stayed in the Lu family and became the ancestor of the Lu family, he couldn't just ignore them.

So in Lu Changsheng's view, it was the best choice to establish his own family with his children.

He would not forget the Lu family, and when he had the ability, he would take care of them and help them as much as he could.

After all, a drop of water is returned with a spring.

Besides, his current relationship with the Lu family is impossible to break.

End of Volume Remarks

The protagonist has established his foundation, and it is time to start a new chapter.

So I also want to write a remark and say something.

The main reason is that I wrote this remark last month, but because I wrote too slowly and was too slow, it was delayed until now, and I forgot to post it yesterday.

Alas, I don’t know how to evaluate my own pace. I won’t say anything, I will just give my brother two punches.

First of all, thank you for your support, which made this book a masterpiece at the beginning of last month.

I still remember how excited I was at that time.

Before it was put on the shelves, the editor said that the performance was good, with 2,600 follow-up readings, but only 1,000 first orders. I thought the book collapsed.

Unexpectedly, as I wrote, the performance has been steadily improving, which really surprised me.

Looking back at the plot I wrote, I don’t know what to say.

100 points, barely give it a passing score, although I can read it, there are indeed many problems.

This is also the case when I was writing, I didn't have an outline or a detailed outline, I just started writing out of interest.

When I was writing, I thought about starting from a son-in-law, from marrying a secular woman to having children, and then having children with a spiritual root girl, a spiritual body girl, a fairy, a princess, a female emperor, a goddess, etc., and writing one level after another.

But after I really started writing, the content and plot began to get out of control.

And I would have different ideas every day, and my thoughts would continue to diverge.

When writing this kind of thing, after writing, there is no way to correct the problems, and the latter can only fill the holes in the former.

For example, the biggest pitfall of this book is actually the plot ideas before and after it was put on the shelves.

In the fifty-two chapters, I realized that there was a problem.

My intuition after reading books for many years told me that the content was too bland and boring, and it had to be exciting.

But I knew it, but I didn't know how to be exciting and interesting at the time.

So I took Qu Changge's plot as an expectation and released it in advance.

I immediately drew a peach blossom Gu, thinking about increasing the excitement.

But after writing it, I still felt that it was not good enough. I thought that the protagonist was trapped in Qingzhu Mountain and had to go out to have something to do and feel happy.

So there was the plot of Jiulongfangshi.

But after leaving Qingzhu Mountain and arriving at Jiulongfangshi, I felt that I lacked the warmth of family and lacked a sense of security.

And coming to Fangshi is equivalent to opening a new map, and you have to lay out a lot of things.

As a result, when I wrote it, not only was there no excitement, but it was also framed by daily trivialities, and the content seemed very watery.

Originally, Zhang Shan, the owner of the Lingfu Shop, two apprentices, Gao He, the neighbor next door, and so on, these characters would have other plots.

But when I wrote here, because the performance of the book on the shelves was also a collapse, I was actually quite anxious and thought about how to write it.

In my mind, I wanted to give the protagonist something to do, and let the Lu family's things push the protagonist to go, so that the protagonist could show off, so all these bland plots were diluted.

The plot of Jindan girl was also brought forward for this reason, used to improve strength, improve trump cards, and give the protagonist room to perform.

But after writing this plot and preparing to do things, I found that I lacked time to settle down.

Things can't all come out at once, they have to be done step by step.

At this time, I wanted to lay out the Lu family, and wanted to make the Lu family have problems inside and outside, so that the protagonist can do things and show his edge, so there was the plot of Lu Miaoyang.

But once this plot came out, it caused another wave of fun.

The ideas changed over and over, and they all affected the subsequent plot path.

There was no way, I could only change the text.

After this wave of changes, I gradually gave up struggling.

Because on that day, I also reread the book and roughly realized where the problem was.

But knowing the problem is knowing, there is no way to go back and change it, and there is no way to get back on track.

Moreover, the previous plot has already discouraged many people. If the style changes again, it is equivalent to screening readers.

This is also the reason why everyone has been saying that the rhythm is slow, but the rhythm is still like this.

If you say it's urgent, I am definitely more anxious than you.

After all, this book is profitable. I won't screw screws anymore. I can also consider buying a BYD to drive online taxis.

But I can't do anything about it. I really can't struggle anymore.

I don't know how to write a good enough plot.

And in this case, the rhythm cannot be solved by improving the foundation alone.

Because the time progress has not been carried out, the protagonist's children have not grown up, and this plot will be difficult to carry out.

If the foundation is built in a hurry, there is no place to show off, and there is no plot, and it will fall into the rhythm of forcing the plot again, and there will be problems again.

And my writing style without detailed outlines, and thinking about it at will, does have a big problem.

For example, after marrying my wife Lu Miaoge and her sister, I was ready to solve the current situation, and the protagonist immediately completed the Qi Refining and went to the Immortal City to build the foundation.

But in the 128th chapter, I was too careless and wrote a love tribulation, which made me feel that this plot had to be written for the ten-year agreement, and it was not good to delay it.

As a result, all kinds of ideas popped up as soon as I wrote, which made me numb. I have been writing until now.

Otherwise, in my opinion, this plot can be written after the protagonist has established his foundation, and the effect will even be better.

After saying so much gossip, everyone knows what will happen in the next volume.

The protagonist obtains spiritual land, establishes his own family, and starts farming and raising children to develop.

Explain why the protagonist wants to establish his own family instead of playing the idea of ​​occupying the magpie's nest and the Tian family replacing the Qi family.

Before it was put on the shelves, many readers left messages saying that they could occupy the Lu family by giving birth to children.

But I never thought of doing this from the beginning.

First, I think it will have a bad reputation.

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