Chapter 319: Sougo Tsuchima’s Suggestions Are Often Unexpected

By the way, An Yilun also suddenly thought that he had only revealed his identity on the Internet, and had not yet shown his erudite (nerdy) side like Senior Sister Kasumigaoka.

"boom!"

An Yilun also completed a soil seat again.

"Teacher Kasumi Shiko, please, please don't do this. I really want a copy of the author's signature. I have read all of "Metronome of Love"... At first, I didn't quite understand Sayuka's thoughts. , but since I read it, I discovered, ah, it turns out that Sayuka also has reasons of one kind or another, just like the hippopotamus in "White Love Song"...

However, the plot of "Metronome of Love" did not develop like "White Love Brother". Instead, it was like "Little Love Song", which was sweet and sad. However, I think if it was like "The Girl Who Came from the Sky" General development will be more attractive but not necessarily..."

Kasumigaoka Shiyu: # ^_^

This glasses geek does have some skills. What he mentioned seems to be some of the GALGAME works that she has learned from.

There is no way, Kasumigaoka Shiu, even though she has a long black hair, long thighs, and fair skin, she is still single and solo till now. Her only love experience is probably in the GALGAME game. How could there be no trace of the GALGAME game in the romance light novel I wrote?

Even the second female lead has some shadows of the heroine of the GALGAME game. This is why Sougo Doma complained, what the hell is that Shinui? Are they from Perfect Stars? Isn’t the heroine of the GALGAME game a perfect star?

While Kasumigaoka Shiyu was thinking, An Yilun finally beat Wang Bang out.

"Well, Mr. Kasumi Shiko, I can honestly say that although there is room for improvement in the content of "Metronome of Love", they are just some minor flaws and are innocuous. But apart from the content, the content of "Metronome of Love" is Indeed, there is still a big problem..."

These words finally aroused Shiyu Kasumigaoka's interest: "What's the problem with "Metronome of Love"?"

Due to the influence of the autograph session, the sales of a single volume have exceeded one million copies. Kasumigaoka Shiyu, who is full of self-confidence, wants to hear what else this glasses geek with evil intentions has to say.

Speaking of this, An Yilun also stood up again. He clenched his fists and said with excitement: "Yes, the problem with "Metronome of Love" is that-the illustrations! For a light novel, interrupting It is its soul. Even if it is a rubbish light novel, people will choose to buy it because of the interjection. It is called:

"Buy illustrations and get toilet paper for free", but for excellent light novels, illustrations are the finishing touch. However, there are also illustrations that are not worthy of the novel, which implicates the novel itself and makes its quality drop by more than one level. Obviously, the illustrations of "Metronome of Love" are not worthy of the novel itself...

If it weren't for being dragged down by illustrations..." An Yilun is also brewing. Years of acting experience have taught An Yilun that he understands that only the explosion after brewing can shock others. Just like his current craze after brewing, look. It came so naturally: "If it weren't for the illustrations, "Metronome of Love" would have become popular earlier! "

This point really touches the heart of Shiyu Kasumigaoka. Think about it, for a new author, will the library prepare him for a big shot in the illustration industry? It was obviously impossible, but even if Kasumigaoka Shiyu wanted to object, she had no confidence at that time when she had not yet achieved results. For her at that time, it was already a matter of gratitude that the novel could be published...

Illustrator or something? Just make do with it.

Looking at Shiyu Kasumigaoka's face that changed slightly, An Yilun also knew that the matter was done, and it was time to show off his capital: "By the way, Teacher Kasumigaoka, I actually have some acquaintances here when it comes to illustration. Well, if that guy could be responsible for the illustrations of "Metronome of Love", I'm sure the results would be much better than they are now. This is also my opinion as a fan..."

If it had been normal, Kasumigaoka Shiyu might have wanted to hear what A Yilunya, a guy with evil intentions, wanted to do, but today, she once again glanced in the direction of Sougo Toma.

At this time, Sougo Doma was pulling a certain Shizuka Hiratsuka into the teacher's office with a smile on his face.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu: (ノBenefit)ノ彡┻━┻

Sougo-kun, you're done, right? She had just been successfully assaulted by Shiina Mashiro, but she turned around and hooked up with a single female teacher. Mr. Hiratsuka, please wake up quickly. What kind of unnatural expression is that on your face?

Seeing this scene, Kasumigaoka Shiu didn't have any intention of testing the glasses geek in front of her. No, it should be said that she wanted to test what the scumbag wanted:

"I will discuss the illustration issue with the editor. Sorry, I have something else to do..." Not to mention having acquaintances in the illustration industry, even if all the big guys in the illustration industry come forward now, they won't be enough to hire her as an artist for the next book. , Shiina Mashiro hit it with one hand.

It was actually Sougo Toma's idea to let Mashiro try drawing illustrations before drawing comics. There was no other way. To use Sougo Toma's own words to explain: Mashiro's painting skills are probably at the peak of LV4. Unless he devotes himself to teaching regardless of the life and death of the whole world, otherwise, Mashiro's painting skills will most likely stagnate for a period of time in a short period of time.

The so-called bottleneck period of mankind is nothing more than this. Fortunately, Mashiro's purpose is not to improve his painting skills, but to learn to draw comics. LV4's skills are enough for him to do it with ease. Therefore, what Mashiro lacks is not "drawing skills" ”, but common sense.

I still remember Sougo Doma reading the first draft drawn by Mashiro. In the beginning, the male protagonist fell in love with the heroine because of a dog. Before he could figure out what was going on, the male and female protagonists had already entered the palace of marriage.

Although there is a lack of common sense about Mashiro in the original work, the lack is to such an extent that Sougo Toma can’t help but: (ノBenefit) ノ彡┻━┻

What the hell is this!

At that time, Sougo Doma even had a friendly discussion with him: "Mashiro, why does the hero fall in love with the heroine because of the dog?"

Shiina Mashiro's serious red phoenix eyes were slightly confused: "Isn't it possible? Sougo!"

"No, I just think that the hero fell in love with the heroine because of the dog. It is better to let the hero fall in love with the dog directly and marry the dog..." Don't expect Sougo Doma to come up with any reliable suggestions.

However, Shiina was so serious that she said, "Sougo, if the dog marries the hero, what will the heroine do?"

Tsuchima Sougo: ヾ(ゞ)

This guy also knows about the heroine’s problems! That's right, probably in Mashiro's head, comics are composed of male protagonists and female protagonists. However, this did not bother him, and Sougo Doma began to follow the instructions.

"Mashiro, actually we can start with a four-panel comic. In the first panel, the male protagonist meets the female protagonist. In the male protagonist's heart, that day, we met. In the second panel, the male protagonist cannot control his emotions and steps forward. Chat with the heroine. In the third frame, the heroine becomes shy. In the fourth frame, the male protagonist marries the dog brought out by the heroine. Isn’t it surprising?”