About the Plot
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First of all, with only 800,000 words, do you want to rush to see the finale? to be frank. Can't do it. Besides, he now has a book from heaven. Although the restrictions are large, it does not prevent him from being invincible.
The protagonist has ten apprentices, and if they want to capture them one by one, they are not stupid and need some means. The cultivation base must also increase step by step, even stronger than the peak period.
Second, right now, the worldview is not activated at all.
Some readers are so anxious that they want to reach the sky in one step, 800,000 words, hurry up to get them all, hurry up and end, it would be more comfortable to write the word "finished" directly. The protagonist is directly invincible in the universe, Zhu Honggong, Zhaoyue, Duanmusheng, what else do they need to do, isn't it a drag? My level is limited, but I also don't believe that high-level "platinum authors" dare to write such a plot.
Also, I think the plot should be coherent.
What you thought was a small theater, you jumped to the bottom, but in fact there was no foreshadowing above. If you look directly at the next one, you will feel very bored, so you will feel water, so a vicious circle, because you just skipped the foreshadowing. ... Just like Chapter 2, which was only updated today, without Yu Shangrong's feet and bones, how could he chop the lotus seat and rise nine leaves? Slashing directly at the sapphire altar? Isn't that mentally retarded? Do normal people slash themselves with knives? Right, after cutting it? Seriously injured and promoted to Jiuye for no reason? I need something... So if you didn't read these two chapters, you saw it directly later, wow Second Senior Brother Nine Leaves... Then after finishing it, scolded: That's all nine leaves? Stupid than the author, Jiu Ye is so simple?
When the second senior brother returned, the follow-up reading was very high (the Shuntian Garden was lower, but if there was no Shuntian Garden, the second senior brother had already thought about it and hung up), and now writing Dawu, there are many people who don't want to read it, which leads to complaints He abandoned the book, but this ups and downs will definitely have a follow-up wave, and they will scold me when I write about the big brother... because they ignore this part of the foreshadowing...
Distressed mushrooms.
I hope to be more patient. I remember that I used to read books every day, and it became a habit. Isn’t it good to have something to look at every day? Reading is a pleasure to read.
Finally, the most important point is that it would be better if you can support the genuine version of the pirated version. Genuine is the most important thing to support the author to go on. At most a few cents a day, reading my books in a month, and smoking less cigarettes is enough, but this is my job!
There are more than 4 updates every day, and sometimes there are only 3 updates in Calvin. It can't compare to the big guy who is faster and faster, but it can be updated stably. The state of the past two days has been poor, so it is inevitable that the mood will be affected. When writing characters, it is obviously not as interesting as before (I just want to pull the rhythm and quickly push, and write the content that the readers want to see, which causes the original interesting characters to immediately become facialized), if If I think this chapter is not pleasing to the eye, just treat the author as farting. I'm so sorry.
I also hope that all brothers and sisters will support me, thank you.