A Summary of March

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As written in the testimonials on the shelves, I am a big hitter, and I have not been able to support myself since I wrote the book.

Fortunately, the grades of this book are okay, barely enough.

Laomou is very grateful to all book friends for their encouragement and subscription, as well as various rewards.

Today, March 15th, is also my birthday. I took the opportunity to summarize:

My writing style is relatively disadvantageous. I always dig holes first, and then apply patches. As a result, at first glance, it may be said that it is too buggy, or it may even be said to be poisonous, or it is too incomprehensible. It seems like a dead end. I've been eunuchs twice since the beginning of this book. I've been told by many people that it must not be long, and that it must be thrown into the street. I can't count...

But I persevered.

Some readers often compare me with the authors of Platinum and even Great God, and then step on me and say how bad my writing is (there are also those who sincerely made suggestions, I replied earnestly and thank you very much), in fact, this is flattering me, I really don’t have the strength and strength. Compared with them, I know how much I am, and I just want to make money to support my family. Try to learn from the great gods, maybe I can catch up with them in the future? There is still a dream, maybe it will come true...

A few points:

1. The pits dug: 1. Why the disciples betrayed and subdued; 2. The limit of lifespan; 3. The missing memory; 4. The upper limit of cultivation; These are big pits, and I have already figured out how to bury them. Some other small pits, such as the tenth apprentice or something, are also arranged, and everyone else should remind them.

2. The main character is set. It's really not clear enough. But I have to say two points. First, I didn’t plan to make him as high as I could from the beginning. He is a master, and he wants to teach his disciples to cultivate and be a master, so he should be a little like Hong Qigong (I The demon emperor who has seen Feiying's boss, thinks that he can't be too cold and arrogant like Chen's leader. In addition, he doesn't have Feiying's pen power, so he will settle for the next best and create a less cold and arrogant protagonist).

What is more embarrassing is that at present, the senior and second senior brothers seem to be more successful than the protagonists.

Awkward……

3. Ye Tianxin, I can actually find the original version of everything I wrote. This is a reference to Huang Yaoshi and Mei Chaofeng, and the result is not explained.

4. Identity (race), these are all references to Shanhaijing...such as Baimin, such as three pages, such as Bai Ze, most of them are from Shanhaijing, but I did not make up. And I have already expressed the identities of other disciples very implicitly. The Taoist Ten Passes are from the Taoist classics, various printing methods, etc. Because I want to write the plot smoothly, I did not write the style of the book, which is more in line with my capable style (reader: Gan Ganba Ma Lai Lai ,

Do you mean to be able to say? )

5, the main card. Because the strength has not recovered, only cards can be used, but there are actually magical powers; secondly, when I wrote in the middle, I was in my hometown, there were too many clues, and the environment and inspiration were also poor, which led to the writing a bit fragmented, and it seemed that the protagonist had no sense of purpose, like a passive trigger ... This has something to do with my writing style, I didn't let the protagonist shout it out, the pit I dug was actually the goal. For example, the problem of finding lifespan has been buried since the time of writing Baimin, riding on a yellow living for two thousand years, etc., but the protagonist has a card, so it is useless whether the protagonist has a lifespan, but think about it, what about the apprentices? They will die of old age sooner or later... and why no one breaks through Nine Leaves?

The target problem will be clear after the fight with Gong Yuandu. The battle between the two of them...e, hahaha, I thought no one could guess.

6. Worldview, this has not been revealed. Because I am too lazy to explain the realm of cultivation, the map, and the writing is relatively concise, the rhythm of the foreshadowing is short and brisk, and I did not write those things, otherwise these current plots can be worth two million words.

7, brush merit. In fact, I didn't write clearly, this can't, that can't, but it was said to be all kinds of bugs, and the protagonist's IQ is low. In fact, in many places, it is implicitly expressed that merits and virtues cannot be used. For example, Ming Shiyin said that he did not know how to do good deeds at all; Become a low-level practitioner and have no merit. There are a lot of problems like this, it's my fault that I didn't write in detail enough, and I try to improve it. After all, I am new to writing, and I will work hard to improve it in the future.

8. The pen power is lacking in fire, I admit. For example, the fights are not written as if they were turn-based, and some of them may be because I feel good about myself. Secondly, the settings of some games are quite inconsistent (in fact, most of them have been changed), and many details are not taken care of. Try to focus on the story in the follow-up, downplay the data, if you have any opinions, feel free to mention it, give me a chance to copy the book review ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…

PS: I saw the reward from the leader of the alliance in the middle of writing, thank you for the reward of "Yanlong Wangchen", ah, I seem to owe 6 more... ah ah ah