Become a Passerby Heroine

Chapter 250 Anger Against Miss Zhao

"Let me take a look at the ending first, and give you time to think about it." Zhao Youyue replied again.

In fact, Zhao Youyue's temper comes and goes quickly, and it is her style to always maintain the calmness of a saint.

She didn't bother to ask Han Leng why he hid it in the first place. Didn't Su Li pretend to be a male cartoonist at the beginning?

According to Su Li, her works are male-oriented. In order to mingle with male readers and listen to their unreserved opinions, she thinks it is useful to pretend to be a male creator.

As for youth romance novels, of course there are many female readers. It seems that there is nothing wrong with Han Leng pretending to be a female author. If he had revealed his identity from the beginning, Zhao Youyue might not have raised his opinions so seriously.

However, it is hard to tell whether "April is Beautiful" is masculine or feminine. It should be masculine in nature. Look how happy the male lead is, with a perfect first love, and with a longing goddess who pays for him...

Zhao Youyue is actually a very tolerant girl, probably only the person she cares about the most can make her angry, for example, her tsundere Ma Ma Wang Hua, sometimes she is so angry that she wants to run away from home!

Han Leng obviously has not reached this level.

But she can't just let him go, there must be punishment for doing something wrong.

Zhao Youyue looked at the finale sent by Han Leng. Although she had already experienced it once in the world of works, it is also very interesting to watch how she does in the world of works by reading the text.

There is one thing about Han Leng that Zhao Youyue has always appreciated very much, and that is his writing style. He is naturally very sensitive to words, and the sentences he writes can often become self-contained quotations.

Otherwise, why is "April is Beautiful" called "April is your perfect composition"?

There are even loyal fans who have extracted the wonderful sentences in it and made up Lengzi's classic quotations——

"My world is silent and can't accommodate others." This is the psychology of the male protagonist described in the early stage, but Chu Luoxun's music makes his world full of beautiful music again.

"There is a city in everyone's heart. When you want to escape, you will hide in it. Some people hide for a long time, some people hide for a short time, but I never go out... This is me A city in my heart, a ruin in the eyes of others." Obviously, this is also the male protagonist who had a psychological shadow at the beginning, but with the help of Chu Luoxun, he finally came out.

"Many people's sadness just wants to show everyone that they are sad. In fact, no one in this world can understand another person's sadness."

"Compared to those who try to suppress the world with their loud voices, those who make the whole world quiet and listen to you whispering are more terrifying." When Han Leng wrote this sentence, it was Miss Zhao that was in his mind.

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The writing style of youth novels, in fact, the more charming the better, it is not an online novel, the selling point is "pretending to face", "fighting monsters and upgrading", and even its plot is not a selling point. Looking at all youth novels, the real plot There are very few exciting things, and its real selling point is actually a feeling and a resonance! So sometimes the more hypocritical the writing, the more readers like it.

If a youth novel can make you sigh, miss you, or even make you suddenly sad, then it is a success!

And this of course requires those sentences with texture, which can be used in full-score compositions.

Because Zhao Youyue lacks this kind of talent in writing, she naturally appreciates Han Leng's literary talent very much. When reading his articles, she can really read each word slowly, because this is a kind of enjoyment.

Zhao Youyue almost finished watching the finale in one sitting. The part about Chu Luoxun perfectly restored what she did in the world of the work. She had no opinion, it was perfect, and the quality of the writing reached its peak!

But the ending of the hero and heroine made her frown.

Although Zhao Youyue is not very good at in-depth analysis of articles, she can also see that although the male protagonist Gu Yuan still loves the female protagonist deeply, and treats the female protagonist with all kinds of tenderness and consideration, but he treats the female protagonist as if he is a relative, while he treats Chu Luo Xun's deep nostalgia has been shown through some small details at the end, making it seem that his favorite is actually Chu Luoxun.

This is absolutely misleading!

Zhao Youyue has experienced everything in the world of works. She knows best that Gu Yuan's true love is Lin Meiyue, but when Han Leng writes it like this, the problem becomes complicated in an instant, and what Han Leng writes is what happened in the world of works... …

Is this the fear of literati? The same thing is written in different words, some places are written more, some places are simply ignored, and it turns out to have two meanings!

This is the so-called spring and autumn brushwork.

In addition, the ending seems to imply that one day, the truth about Lin Meiyue accepting Chu Luoxun's gift and becoming a "genius composer" will come to light!

This is even more inconsistent with Zhao Youyue's expectations. As the real body of Chu Luoxun, she is willing to achieve Lin Meiyue. She hopes that Lin Meiyue will get better and better, and hopes to make up for Lin Meiyue's lack of musical talent. In this case, she and Gu Yuan should be a better match.

According to Zhao Youyue's thinking, this matter should never be exposed for the rest of her life, even if Lin Meiyue "creates" no famous songs in the future, it can be covered up by the peak period.

But once this matter is exposed, Lin Meiyue will definitely be ruined, right?

And Gu Yuan definitely can't tolerate Lin Meiyue's behavior of possessing Chu Luoxun's works, the beautiful relationship between the two of them will even break because of this!

Even if Chu Luoxun died, she seemed to be the main culprit for the breakup of the relationship between the hero and heroine...

Thinking about it this way, Zhao Youyue, a senior member of Lin Meiyue's party, would of course be very upset, because from the beginning to the end, she simply hoped that the hero and heroine would come together and love each other harmoniously and happily for the rest of their lives.

But because Han Leng deliberately "learned for nothing", Chu Luoxun was suspected of being a "little three", and Lin Meiyue frankly possessed Chu Luoxun's original song for love, which seemed to be "Bichi".

Zhao Youyue really didn't think much about it before, but now she realizes Han Leng's sinister intentions!

The ending seems to be very happy, but in fact, as long as you think about it for a while, you will understand that the future of the hero and heroine is hard to say!

She immediately sent a message to Han Leng, bluntly saying that this ending is inappropriate, if the other party is still Leng Zi, then she will definitely be more tactful...

But Han Liangliang responded faster. He said that it is okay for women to admit their mistakes, but there is no way for him to change the ending!

"I don't understand why you always favor Gu Yuan and Lin Meiyue. You've been like this from the beginning! Does Chu Luoxun deserve to suffer?"

For the sake of his beloved Goddess Chu, Han Leng is angry at Miss Zhao!

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