Say 2 Things From Your Heart.
I want to say a few words here because I couldn’t help but read some readers’ comments. Many readers said that I was stupid, and even said that I was forced to watch pirated copies. It’s okay to say that I am stupid, but they will say that I am stupid later. I was forced to read the pirated version, and I don’t know what to say. To be honest, I was really shocked when I saw these comments. I also understand why many authors become eunuchs halfway through.
Some people say that I can write the entire plot of the dinner in one paragraph, but I have to write it in two paragraphs or one chapter. Yes, I can write the entire dinner plot in one paragraph, but is it really enjoyable for you to watch like this? Oh, Chen Anxia attended the dinner party, defeated Ichiro Minamimoto, and lost to Master Wuwei. The pretense was over and the dinner party was over. Do you want to write it like this?
I admit that there may be some redundant descriptions in the chapters I wrote, which is probably indispensable for every author. However, I mainly describe important characters in detail, such as Master Wuwei. If I really write a paragraph , then how can he have a sense of presence after he joins Ten Blades? I just want to portray the characters more and make them more fleshed out.
I admit that my writing skills are insufficient, and there may be some areas that are not well controlled and seem very wordy. I can only say that the author is working hard to improve, and I hope there are shortcomings. Please forgive me, and if you have any good suggestions, I can For example, if you think I have water here, you can point out which part of me looks watery and why? Let me learn from experience, avoid repeating mistakes in the future, and continue to improve.