Explanation and Advice

As we all know, the author is a newcomer, and the road to writing will inevitably be bumpy and not so smooth.

First of all, I would like to apologize to all readers.

In the last volume of "A Ray of Sunshine", because of the lack of foreshadowing for Voldemort's confusing curse, many people seemed inexplicable, and only after seeing the last person did they suddenly realize.

But in fact, because of this narrative technique, a small number of readers disappeared in the spring breeze.

At that time, I had to cut out a large part of the plot content in the outline, and split "A Ray of Sunshine" into a volume of "A Place of Bright Spring". Together, there are more than 170 chapters in total, and the original preset is to write more than 200 chapters.

This volume of "Crack Creak" draws on previous experience, and wrote out the big boss behind the scenes early on. Well, I didn't expect everyone's reaction to be like this.

To be honest, the author is dumbfounded.

Well, how should I say it.

If the chapter where Harris and Grindelwald meet was not written, yes, there was no plan to write this chapter in the initial outline, and who would have reacted that Grindelwald jumped out to make trouble?

I'm afraid there are not many, after all, Lao Ge's current character motivation is to wait for Dumbledore to die, so that he can spend his old age peacefully.

But the author feels that there are only wrong names, not wrong nicknames. Grindelwald is known as the first generation of the Dark Lord. This is a point that is not in the original book but is widely recognized by everyone. He has passed through decades and is old. Is he really so concerned?

The content of the original book is not very affectionate. Dumbledore has indeed betrayed the ideals shared with Grindelwald and imprisoned him for decades. Apart from the strong friendship that cannot be dissipated, is there really no complaint? ?

Therefore, it became logical for Grindelwald to come back and do things.

Back then, because of the atomic bomb, Grindelwald set off a revolution. In this era, short videos, cameras, the Internet, satellites...

For the wizarding world, it has become more dangerous, and it has even reached the moment of life and death.

Will someone like Grindelwald really retire obediently?

Starting with such a psychological motivation, Lao Gumai entered the battlefield with full force. Such a veteran, let alone Anton, even veterans like Snape and Lupin, it is hard to say that there will be a good one.

Lao Ge went out and slashed at Dumbledore with the first knife, but Dumbledore couldn't guard against it.

The second knife was cut on Anton, and then Anton took over. This is what I am writing now.

It may be that the foreshadowing and rendering are not in place, or the plot is pressing on the protagonist layer by layer, which makes everyone feel uncomfortable.

The above is the explanation of the updated content in the past few days.

Then the next step is to ask for everyone's opinions.

At the crossroads in front of the protagonist, where should we go?

A. Turn over the table, fight if you want, and kill it to your heart's content. (Gryffindor)

B. Follow the trend and gain benefits. (Slytherin)

C. None of my business. Pat your ass and leave, be a planeswalker, wander on the edge of conflict, and concentrate on writing books "Dumbledore's Wisdom" and "Anton's Wonderful Body Transfiguration". (Ravenclaw)

D. Other. (Hufflepuff)

Warriors, make a choice.

(I always think the most interesting thing about serialized novels is that its creation is not just the creation of the author, but readers can also participate in it, which is very interesting.)

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To avoid misunderstanding, I would like to add that the above question is to solicit the opinions of the readers of this volume.

The main outline of this book is still one school year after another school year. The plot goes crazy and then returns to the original plot. I believe that many people have already had psychological expectations for my way of writing, right? Right? have it?

So in the third year, Anton continued to attend classes at Hogwarts. This is the main line that will not be revised.

Now I am just asking about the main line of this volume of "Crackling" to see everyone's preferences.